So, as you mentioned, we need to plot out some beef for the stories structure. The island is great and the ships could be interesting( we have the beginning sort of thought out) , so the next part is what happens after you leave the comfort of your home. Now there are a few approaches to what we could do. After you join the men on the ships and leave- you could...
A. Crash- due to some disturbance, like monsters or maybe you are shot down...maybe the weather plays a part
B. You make it to where the men on the ships are trying to get and the scene that they have described has changed drastically- maybe its far worse or new information has presented itself and the goal of the game has changed slightly
C. You fall off the ship? something to the degree of an accident occurs and you find yourself alone somewhere
D. maybe you expose the men on the ships and fall victim to their ploys-(not as strong as the previous examples)
so these are just a few Ideas, tell me what you think about the takes. Personally i think that if you fall off the ship that could lead to an interesting story arc, almost like, the men on the ships have described the scenario that they and you are faced with, and you fall off the ships somehow and find yourself right smack in the middle of it all.
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